Sofia’s poem “On the Death of my Father” in Lunaris Review

ON THE DEATH OF MY FATHER

By  | July 23, 2016

You are gone and with you I cannot converse
my prayer our only communication channel
This phone call will certainly reach you

My cries no longer heave
I have started to play the piano again
got that pixie cut with long bangs

I know you are well
I can feel you
I see you smile

27 responses to “Sofia’s poem “On the Death of my Father” in Lunaris Review”

  1. I can feel you…I can see your smile– very moving

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    1. Thank you so much, Robin!Hope you are well. I appreciate your comment immensely. Be well!

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      1. Thank you, Sofia! I am very, very busy, but I am taking one day at a time. 🙂

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      2. Be well my friend and rest up!Hugs from Athens!

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      3. Hugs to you, Sofia! Thank you for your kindness and good wishes! 🙂

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  2. πολύ συγκινητικό…
    σε βλέπει από ψηλά και σε θέλει χαρούμενη και δυνατή, Σοφία μου…
    με την αγάπη μου,
    Αλεξία

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    1. Αλεξία μου σε ευχαριστώ πολύ. Να είσαι πάντα καλά και χαρούμενη. Είναι εκεί ψηλά και βλέπει τον Χριστό μας. Νιώθω ότι προσεύχεται για μένα

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  3. Sofia, dear sister, my heart feels your sorrow, but know that he is well. I wanted to share a poem that I was reminded of after reading your poem…it seems like it could be your Fathers words in prayer talking to the Lord, “The Eternal Promise.”, and Also a poem called ” Burtterflies.” that you also could have wrote. I share them to make you smile. Hugs, love and blessings always!

    “The Eternal Promise”

    I shall be with you
    Lord, when I close
    my eyes to sleep…
    I shall rest comfortably
    with you….

    And when I dream now
    shall I not be with you,
    for I shall fly freely
    in my dreams on sweet
    clouds of joy and I
    shall be with you as
    the sun opens its eyes

    For when he arises
    in the morning, I shall
    think on you and the
    blessing of life that
    you bestowed on me
    and my heart shall be
    brighter than the smile
    of the new day’s sun

    I will walk from the
    darkness of death into
    your life-light, for I
    shall be with you in your
    garden, singing praises
    to your eternal love

    And I shall be at peace
    when I am born again as
    my spirit leaves the flesh
    and I will be counted among
    the living in your heaven

    …my sweet Lord.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    “Butterflies”

    Whenever I see the butterflies flying
    I am reminded of your smiling face,
    As I see them taking wing into the sky
    I feel emotions which are never displaced

    For in my heart also live the butterflies
    As they come to life within me each day
    While I count the different memories of you
    Which in my thoughts and dreams will stay

    The brightness of their many vibrant colors
    Produce a vivid rainbow deep within my mind
    Which fills my heart with such unwavering joy
    Allowing me to enjoy them for an endless time

    The butterflies will be my deepest treasure
    Leaving me never again feeling the same
    As the peace they bring to me cannot be measured
    For on their wings are imprinted your name

    God bless you and your family!

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    1. Beautiful poems, Wendell!Thank you for your kindness. Your poetry is sublime!May you always be safe in the hands of our Lord!Be blessed!

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  4. I feel your sorrow in my heart and also I feel the joy that you know your father is well. It reminds me of a poem I wrote “The Eternal Promise,” I could see your Father pray this prayer to God. the second poem is Butterflies that is one I share for you! God bless your family dear sister!

    The Eternal Promise

    I shall be with you
    Lord, when I close
    my eyes to sleep…
    I shall rest comfortably
    with you….

    And when I dream now
    shall I not be with you,
    for I shall fly freely
    in my dreams on sweet
    clouds of joy and I
    shall be with you as
    the sun opens its eyes

    For when he arises
    in the morning, I shall
    think on you and the
    blessing of life that
    you bestowed on me
    and my heart shall be
    brighter than the smile
    of the new day’s sun

    I will walk from the
    darkness of death into
    your life-light, for I
    shall be with you in your
    garden, singing praises
    to your eternal love

    And I shall be at peace
    when I am born again as
    my spirit leaves the flesh
    and I will be counted among
    the living in your heaven
    …my sweet Lord.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Butterflies

    Whenever I see the butterflies flying
    I am reminded of your smiling face,
    As I see them taking wing into the sky
    I feel emotions which are never displaced

    For in my heart also live the butterflies
    As they come to life within me each day
    While I count the different memories of you
    Which in my thoughts and dreams will stay

    The brightness of their many vibrant colors
    Produce a vivid rainbow deep within my mind
    Which fills my heart with such unwavering joy
    Allowing me to enjoy them for an endless time

    The butterflies will be my deepest treasure
    Leaving me never again feeling the same
    As the peace they bring to me cannot be measured
    For on their wings are imprinted your name.

    Hugs and blessings,
    Wendell

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    1. Thank you so much! Dedicated to my dad who passed away in November! Be blessed!

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      1. Beautiful, Sofia!

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  5. Hi Sofia. Thank you for liking my poem “Swallowed!” Peace and Best wishes. The Foureyed Poet.

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    1. You are kindly welcome! Best wishes, Sofia

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  6. This is lovely, Sofia!

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    1. Thank you so much! Have a great week ahead! Hugs from Pefki!

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    1. Ah, thank you so much prewitt!His memory is still etched on my mind. Nine months already but I am still aching. Have a beautiful day from hot Greece!

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      1. Its strange how grief an loss linger. But i know you. Your a strong, brilliant and talented woman. Best of everythig to you.
        B.

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      2. Thank you my friend!Be well!Best of everything to you, too!Athenian hugs 🙂

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  7. Reblogged this on Sofia Kioroglou and commented:

    Tι τιμή για μένα…Το ποίημα μου ” On the Death of my Father” είναι ανάμεσα στις 6 υποψηφιότητες για το 2017 Best of the Net Award.Δεν το περίμενα. Σας ευχαριστώ πάρα πολύ όλους που με στηρίζετε. Ευχηθείτε καλή επιτυχία. θα σας ενημερώσω σύντομα για τα αποτελέσματα!

    So excited to hear that my poem ” On the Death of my Father” is part of the the six poems nominated by Poetry Editor, Abeiku Arhin Tsiwah, for the 2017 Best of the Net Award.

    Sophia,
    I’m pleased to inform you that your poem ‘On the Death of My Father’ (published in our Issue 4, link is attached below) is part of the six poems nominated by our Poetry Editor, Abeiku Arhin Tsiwah, for the 2017 Best of the Net Award.
    Wishing you the best!
    Warmly,
    Tolulope Oke
    Publisher, Lunaris Review

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  8. Wow, Sofia! Well done and good luck. I love the poem – brings back memories…

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    1. Thanks, my dear friend ! Lots of hugs from Marathonas!

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